"It is difficult / to get the news from poems / yet men die miserably every day / for lack / of what is found there" - - - - - - William Carlos Williams. #quote
Tom, if you can really cook like that, I'll come over for Thanksgiving and never miss the turkey. And I think your poem nailed the truth and beauty thing. I think I'll lock the door and write a poem now. About what, I don't know--doesn't even matter. Holding that nice sharp pencil, welcoming the Word, that's the joy.
[edit: the following qoted remarks are my friends and family's responses to my own poetry. The intention was to show solidarity with the author and the polite yet insincere feedback on their cookery, such a clever analogy.]
"Is it even a poem?"
"Why doen't it rhyme"
"I don't get it"
"I don't get poetry"
"Not poetry!"
I think your friends and family must be a lot more long suffering and socially polite than mine :)
[edit - as exemplified by the comments I recieved above. ]
#ICYMI "The Faculty at Ghost Academy" is a Petrarchan sonnet - - so, of course, it rhymes and is tethered to lines composed in iambic pentameter. . . . . . . "Free Verse" does not rhyme because CRAFT and METER, so dear to the heart of formalists, are part of a discipline must be learned and practiced daily.
The remarks I left are not my thoughts - I should have said they are my friends and family's views on any poem I have attempted to share with them. I will edit my remark.
Of course I understand the difference between form/ formal poems and free verse. I almost always write the latter, and in quite a prose style, hence the 'is it poetry?' comment I often get.
Yes, I know, Emily. I was aware you were repeating what other people often say. No one on this forum would say, "I don't get poetry" - most certainly NOT you! :-)
"It is difficult / to get the news from poems / yet men die miserably every day / for lack / of what is found there" - - - - - - William Carlos Williams. #quote
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If only....I loved your poem.
Thank you. And this might very well occur . . . . "Your books will earn a living after death." :-)
Well done in the best of the senses! The best writing evokes rather than describes. I can taste it all!
Tom, if you can really cook like that, I'll come over for Thanksgiving and never miss the turkey. And I think your poem nailed the truth and beauty thing. I think I'll lock the door and write a poem now. About what, I don't know--doesn't even matter. Holding that nice sharp pencil, welcoming the Word, that's the joy.
LOVE this! It left me joyful and hungry for more. :)
Preface to a guided writing session: though I am a novelist rather than a poet, it made me laugh over and over.
[edit: the following qoted remarks are my friends and family's responses to my own poetry. The intention was to show solidarity with the author and the polite yet insincere feedback on their cookery, such a clever analogy.]
"Is it even a poem?"
"Why doen't it rhyme"
"I don't get it"
"I don't get poetry"
"Not poetry!"
I think your friends and family must be a lot more long suffering and socially polite than mine :)
[edit - as exemplified by the comments I recieved above. ]
Very enjoyable article.
#ICYMI "The Faculty at Ghost Academy" is a Petrarchan sonnet - - so, of course, it rhymes and is tethered to lines composed in iambic pentameter. . . . . . . "Free Verse" does not rhyme because CRAFT and METER, so dear to the heart of formalists, are part of a discipline must be learned and practiced daily.
Hi LindaAnn,
The remarks I left are not my thoughts - I should have said they are my friends and family's views on any poem I have attempted to share with them. I will edit my remark.
Of course I understand the difference between form/ formal poems and free verse. I almost always write the latter, and in quite a prose style, hence the 'is it poetry?' comment I often get.
Yes, I know, Emily. I was aware you were repeating what other people often say. No one on this forum would say, "I don't get poetry" - most certainly NOT you! :-)
Definitely convert that three season porch! I am already delighted to be sitting there!
Lovely! Thank you.
Wow, just beautiful. Thank you for these words filled with truth and wonder and joy.
I love everything about this - also, I want recipes. 😉 A great reminder to.just create what's on your heart. 💙💚🦋
Thank you. Rolled on into that joy of humor for me.
huh?